Panel 2: Really not fond of that third word balloon at the bottom of the panel, which makes two panels in a row with dWARF’s head isolated by balloons above and below. Best, I think, to have removed panel 1’s second balloon and moved this panel’s top two balloons over there, then popped the “BUT YOU PROLLY (etc.)” dialogue up top, leaving dWARF!’s chest uncovered. Placing that word balloon closer to the on-screen images of Ninjette and Thugboy in the background would’ve made for sounder storytelling, IMHO.

Panel 3: Well.

Panel 4: I might actually have considered giving that manga-style “popping crossed veins” image in Emp’s hair(?) a wee sound FX, such as “SKRKK” or the like. Just as well that I didn’t.

-Adam Warren