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1: While yesterday I complained about the cropping of a page impinging
on a word balloon, here at upper left we see a much worse example, as
Captain Katana’s blurted cry of “GUCHKK” gets its letter G cut off by
the top edge of the page. Whoops! (Note also that "GUCHKK" is a gurgling cry ported directly from Howard Chaykin's personally influential comic American Flagg!)
Panel 2: Aaaaaaaaand I just noticed that Decade-Ago Me forgot to draw the magic sword that was supposed to be driven through the top of Katana's head. Whoops, again!
Panel 5: Hope you’ll excuse a bit of artistic license, here, as I rather doubt that the grown-up fingers of adult-form Spooky were that much longer than those of her six-years-ago body, to the point that her gloves’ fingers are dangling as I showed them in this panel.
-Adam Warren